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Students manner is like a mirror which can reflect their cultural quality and the image of the school.
Our school is very beautiful and most of the students behave well. However, some uncivilized behavior does exist on campus. For example, Some students throw rubbish here and there or spit in public. Some walk on the grass. Others are even addicted to smoking in the dormitory.
In my opinion, all the behavior above will lead to bad habits and have an ill effect on our character. To make things worse, it is sure to damage the reputation of our school.What should we do? First, the school should make some strict rules and those who dont obey them should be punished. Second, the school can offer more lessons or hold some activities on good manners to raise the students public awareness.
Only by these means can we make our school more harmonious.(151字)
点评 这是一篇得满分的习作，语言丰富，结构完整，行文流畅。
首先，该习作结构严谨、紧凑。全文以Students manner is like a mirror which can reflect ...这个比喻句作为开篇，生动形象。接下来的段落中分别使用了主题句some uncivilized behavior does exist on campus和What should we do。结尾句Only by these means can we make our school more harmonious.简明扼要，首尾呼应。
其次，习作使用了addicted，harmonious等较高级的词汇，以及the school should make some strict rules and those who dont obey them should be punished等较复杂句型，顺应了新的书面表达评分要求，有效地提升了表达的档次。
再者，习作还使用了However, In my opinion, To make things worse,First，Second等连接词、过渡语，加强了句与句之间、段与段之间的联系，表达连贯，逻辑性强。习作较好地体现了新高考书面表达的新要求。
对于如何写好新高考的书面表达，相信从上述三篇习作的分析、点评中不难得出一些规律性的认识。
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