Name:Wang Shan Sex:female Age:16School:Bening Yangguang Middle School
这种填表式表达显然不符合考试要求。正确表达应为:
I’m Wang Shan.gift of sixteen.presently attendingBeing Yangguang Middle SchooL.误例2
日记
Time:March 12.Sunday
Weather:fine
Place:DangShanMountain
What:planttrees
正确表达应为:
March 12.Sunday
Fine
It’s March 12.Tree-planting Day.Eady in the morn-mg,My classmates and lwent to Dang Shan Mountain to planttrees...
2.灵活变通,避免硬译式表达
(1)简单罗列类:表格中的汉语提示简洁凝练,概括性强,表达时切忌逐字逐句翻译,也忌简单或机械地罗列要点,必要时要灵活调整或进行适当的补充。
①业余爱好:游泳、溜冰、集邮、流行音乐。
罗列表达:Hobbits:swimming.skating.coHeetingstamps,popmusic 机械表达:Myhobbies are swimming.skating.collect-ing stamps,popmusic.
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