原句：Many of us are in favor of staying at home.Thevthlnk it’s convement and eomfortable.Thev can save moneyfor other purposes.But thev will lose the chance of gettmg toknow the outsi de wold.

　　修正：Many of us are in favor of staying at home.Theythink it’s both convenient and comfortable.What’s more.they can save money for other purposes.But they Will lose thechance of getting to knowthe outsldewodd.

　　文章通过修正，巧妙地使用了过渡成分。这样，前后连贯，结构紧凑，收到了满意的效果。

　　4.注意写作顺序，避免次序式表达

　　表达时切忌千篇一律，不要完全按照表格内容出现的先后顺序来写，应从语篇角度统筹安排要表达的内容，必要时在表达顺序上作适当调整，目的是使全文重点突出，通顺连贯。

　　实战演练：根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇题为“The Simllanties and differnces between newspapem andwebsites”的英语短文。

　　注意：1短文须包括表中的全部内容，可适当发挥;2词数：100左右;3参考词汇：更新(update)、音频(au-dio)、视频(vldeo)。

　　参考范文：

　　The similaries and dlfferences betweennewspapers and websites

　　Newspapem and websItes are both imporant news mediain the world tody.They are Similar to eaeh other in some wayFor example，they are both used to providing news and infor-marion for people.They have diffeerent pages with various textsand pmtures

　　But there are great differnces between them.Newspa-pets are traditional and have a long hlstory.while websites areqmte new.We bsites need a computer and the Internet.whileyou can read newspaper everywhere And websdes have notonly texts with pictures but also audloS and videos.whichmake stones more interesting What’sbetter.websireschangesall the time.Many websites areupdated many times a day Thelates tnews is al ways able to be seen on websites.

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