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00 shoes and they can only get $ 50,000. If the price of the shoes is lowered to $ 10, as many as 5000 shoes can be sold. Still, only $ 50,000 is made.
[评 析] 本文第一段是对图表所反映出的事实作概述，第二段引用数字做具体说明，结构比较清晰。
As is shown…. As (can be) seen from the table (graph, picture, illustration…) As (has been) proved… 等是英译图表时常使用的表达法。
④ 世界人口增长曲线图
[题 材]… 请对所给图表进行简要说明，并做适当评论。词数100—120。
给出词：人口爆炸population explosion 曲线 curve
[范 文] Growth Curve for Human Population of the World
We hear a great deal about the human population explosion, and a glance at the graph reveals why…. We see that human beings in their first million years did not increase their total number greatly it must have taken hundreds of thousands of years to break the first million mark. Records exist only for the past few centuries, but it is clear that the first documented doubling of population took two centuries (1650—1856); the second doubling a little less than one century; and today it doubles in only 30 years!
[评 析] 因题目中要求做适当评论，所在对图表做说明时，就必须先找到一个突破点。本题显然倾向于让考生以人口爆炸问题为议论中心，因此在落笔时就不妨先把论点摆出来，再援引图中所给的具体数字作依据，使文章产生强烈的震撼力和说服力。
⑤ 日记一则
[题 材] 请根据表格用英语写一篇6月2日的日记。
注意：1、日记须包括表格中所有的内容，可以适当增加细节，使日记连贯。
2、词数100左右。
When Saturday, June 2nd
Where the People’s Park
How take the school bus
Departure time 8:00 a. m.
Arrival time 8:30 a. m.
Programme 8:30 a. m.
Morning: rowing small boats; swimming; picnic
Afternoon: walk along the lake bank; take photos
Time to return 5:00 p.m.
[范 文] A Page from a Student’s Diary
June 2nd Saturday Fine
It was a very nice day. Our class went to the People Park. We took the school bus at the school gate at 8:00 a. m. About 8:30 we arrived there. It is a very large and beautiful park. Many people spend their weekends there because there are a lot of trees, a very large man-made lake and many modern recreational facilities. In the morning, we rowed small boats and swam together, and then we had our picnic among the trees. In the afternoon, we walked along the lake bank, talking and laughing. We took some photos there.
We had a very good time there. We returned at 5:00 p.m. and got home safely.
[评 析] 表格中的内容实际上是组成文章的几个要点，如时间、地点、方式、事件等，所以照表格内容顺序写短文是不可能的，必须另外找一个陈述的顺序。本文以时间为顺序，将所给要素有机地结合起来，使得全文条理清楚，井井有条。
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